girl, I couldn't get much higher...
...unless this long, strange journey to the Night puts me in the Invisible Bobo Boat. There are 2 things in my soul, Day & Night. Before the night falls, I want to do as much work as possible on "Einstein Sex-Play Hyper-Light", which is the new title for my attempts to resurrect what Ted has killed. "Movement & Repose" (the original title) was a good story, until Ted attempted to apply romance formulas, & wrote a really crappy ending.
Since I've become a little manic now, I'm taking advantage of the innate altered state to do a re-make/re-model while my mood is still Roxy. I'm also trying hard not to blow up at Ted. We've been friends for several years now, so I want to break it to him gently that he's wrecked a perfectly good story. I'll run it thru Critters once more, probably do an MPC so I can have the story on Stan's desk soon -- but not this mediocre romance bullshit. Hell, instead of saving the sex for the end, I'm beginning with it.
I began to implement my changes Monday, when upon reading the story & being really distressed by it, I reread it once more & went thru it, erasing a lot of the junk that didn't belong in there. I halted at the new ending, as it'd been well researched, in spite of the fact that the characters acted totally unbelievably. I'm going to move it up to an earlier point in the story, but am not sure yet how many sex scenes will be required. Yoshi gets bare & does it in the end.
Yesterday, I called Car-girl about it, then took a bath as soon as Trish was at work. I was barely out of the tub when she called back, had to pull on my sweater & put on some socks. After that, I began work in earnest, only stopping long enough to have a balogna sandwich & a can of sketti-o's before once more to change the story from nightmare to dream.
Then Car-girl called, offering to take me out to Pizza Hut to talk about it, as I seemed distressed. I halted work, ran over to Albertson's for some milk, dishwasher soap, & a few other things, then swung by the drugstore for Trish's Nasonex. I'd really only just came home when Car-girl arrived in the batmobile.
Trish got off around 3:00, & we decided to visit the new Wally-World, just beyond Kame-Apart. We bought a bunch of groceries for only 12 bucks, so today I'm buying Trish her popcorn shrimp at Albertson's, as I have left over food money. Our food stamps are also going up to $60, due to cost of living increases.
Today I plan to do some more cutting-&-pasting on "Einstein Sex-Play Hyper-Light", especially adding more sex. Ted wanted to save the sex for the end, as that's romance "formula". I do not follow "rules for writing" that come out of books like Romance for Dummies. Although I respect Ted's romance writing & think that it's good that he has an editor at Bantam interested, my stories are about sex-play & not romance.
In the heat of anger, I forge something superior. My dreams will live again. I go now to awaken Trish & fix breakfast. Once she's at Pizza Hut: typewriter torment.
Since I've become a little manic now, I'm taking advantage of the innate altered state to do a re-make/re-model while my mood is still Roxy. I'm also trying hard not to blow up at Ted. We've been friends for several years now, so I want to break it to him gently that he's wrecked a perfectly good story. I'll run it thru Critters once more, probably do an MPC so I can have the story on Stan's desk soon -- but not this mediocre romance bullshit. Hell, instead of saving the sex for the end, I'm beginning with it.
I began to implement my changes Monday, when upon reading the story & being really distressed by it, I reread it once more & went thru it, erasing a lot of the junk that didn't belong in there. I halted at the new ending, as it'd been well researched, in spite of the fact that the characters acted totally unbelievably. I'm going to move it up to an earlier point in the story, but am not sure yet how many sex scenes will be required. Yoshi gets bare & does it in the end.
Yesterday, I called Car-girl about it, then took a bath as soon as Trish was at work. I was barely out of the tub when she called back, had to pull on my sweater & put on some socks. After that, I began work in earnest, only stopping long enough to have a balogna sandwich & a can of sketti-o's before once more to change the story from nightmare to dream.
Then Car-girl called, offering to take me out to Pizza Hut to talk about it, as I seemed distressed. I halted work, ran over to Albertson's for some milk, dishwasher soap, & a few other things, then swung by the drugstore for Trish's Nasonex. I'd really only just came home when Car-girl arrived in the batmobile.
Trish got off around 3:00, & we decided to visit the new Wally-World, just beyond Kame-Apart. We bought a bunch of groceries for only 12 bucks, so today I'm buying Trish her popcorn shrimp at Albertson's, as I have left over food money. Our food stamps are also going up to $60, due to cost of living increases.
Today I plan to do some more cutting-&-pasting on "Einstein Sex-Play Hyper-Light", especially adding more sex. Ted wanted to save the sex for the end, as that's romance "formula". I do not follow "rules for writing" that come out of books like Romance for Dummies. Although I respect Ted's romance writing & think that it's good that he has an editor at Bantam interested, my stories are about sex-play & not romance.
In the heat of anger, I forge something superior. My dreams will live again. I go now to awaken Trish & fix breakfast. Once she's at Pizza Hut: typewriter torment.
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